12月30日雅思大作文示范写作 | 志向远大是否成就个人成功
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本期作者：王瑜
2023年12月30日雅思大作文题目
Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in many societies today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?
在当今许多社会中，雄心壮志是人们所具有的一种积极品质。对于想要在生活中取得成功的人来说，这有多重要?这是一个积极的还是消极的特征?
范文及解析
Introduction
Although opinion has long been divided over whatattributes pave the way forpersonal success, it isa shared wisdomthat determination seems toeclipseimportance of other personal traits that cultivate success in life.
解析
尽管长期以来，人们对哪些特质可以为个人成功铺平道路的看法一直存在分歧，但人们普遍认为，决心似乎超越其他个人特质在人生中培养成功的重要性。
❖ attributes 特质
❖ pave the way for 为某事打下地基
❖ a shared wisdom普遍的认知
❖ eclipse 使某事黯然失色v.
Body 1
One’scravingforattainments and accomplishmentsin life mayvarylargely depending on one’sstatus quo, innate drives andshifting landscapesof social-economic development, butuniversalstriving may include being healthy, safe, fulfilled, happy and loved. Apparently, the aforementioned endeavors are neversure successyielded by constant efforts. In time ofstagnationand frustration, ambitious people could be moreresilienttobounce back, because they value failures as a learning experience. Furthermore, a boosted willpower facilitates thealignmentof an individual's behaviors with long-term objectives, such as letting go bad habits or making breakthroughs in scientific fields. In other words, being loosely determinedpresumably enticesone towardshaphazard temptationsthat ultimatelystalltheir personal progress.
解析
一个人在生活中对成就的渴望可能在很大程度上取决于一个人的现状、内在动力和社会经济发展的变化，但普遍的追求可能包括健康、安全、满足、快乐和被爱。显然，上述的追寻从来都不是靠不断的努力就能成功的。在停滞和挫折的时候，雄心勃勃的人可能会更有弹性地重新振作起来，因为他们把失败视为一种学习经验。此外，增强的意志力有助于使个人行为与长期目标保持一致，比如放弃坏习惯或在科学领域取得突破。换句话说，松散的决定可能会诱使一个人受到随意的诱惑，最终阻碍他们的个人进步。
❖ craving 渴望n.
❖ attainments and accomplishments 成就n.
❖ vary 不同v.
❖ status quo 现状
❖ shifting landscapes 变化的情况
❖ universal 普遍的
❖ sure success 既定的成功
❖ stagnation 停滞
❖ resilient 对困境有承受力的 adj.
❖ bounce back 重新振作
❖ alignment 协调/一致n.
❖ presumably 大概 adv.
❖ Entice 引诱
❖ haphazard temptations 随机的诱惑
❖ stall 阻碍v.
Body 2
Nevertheless, excessivefixationon end goals is an evilcurse;problematic consequencesare generally twofold. Firstly, it relates tostubbornness. For instance, if overwhelmingly stubborn entrepreneurs madefeebleefforts tounwindoutdated labor-intensive managementparadigmsthat had alreadyoutlived their usefulnesswhenbot-aidedeconomy prevailed,defending the old turfsimply puts one’s endeavor in reverse gear. Secondly, it relates toperverse incentives. A goal of making one’s first million at age of 30, for example, may drive one toturn a blind eye tospending quality time with loved ones, not to mention concerning employees’ mental well-being. But according toa rule of thumb, relationships and community connection are betterpredictorsfor long-term success and wellbeing.
解析
然而，过分执着于最终目标是一种邪恶的诅咒;不良后果通常在两方面。首先，它与固执有关。例如，如果顽固到极点的企业家们，在机器人辅助经济盛行的时代，为解除过时的劳动密集型管理模式做出了无力的努力，那么捍卫旧领域只会让自己的努力倒车。其次，它与反向激励有关。例如，在30岁时赚到第一个100万的目标可能会让一个人对与亲人共度的美好时光视而不见，更不用说关心员工的心理健康了。但根据经验法则，人际关系和社区联系是长期成功和幸福的更好预测因素。
❖ fixation 专注n.
❖ curse 诅咒
❖ problematic consequences 不良后果
❖ stubbornness 固执 n.
❖ feeble 微弱的adj.
❖ unwind 解除 v.
❖ paradigm 模式
❖ outlived their usefulness 失去使用价值
❖ bot-aided 机器人辅助的
❖ defending the old turf 捍卫旧领域
❖ reverse gear 倒档
❖ perverse incentives 反向激励
❖ turn a blind eye to 对某事视而不见
❖ a rule of thumb 经验法则
❖ predictors 预测因素
Conclusion
To conclude,intrinsic eagernessmay be a possiblerecipefor success, while it would be apure fallacytodownplayits potential risks.
解析
总而言之，内在的渴望可能是成功的秘诀，而低估其潜在风险则是纯粹的谬论。
❖ intrinsic eagerness 内在的渴望
❖ recipe 秘诀
❖ pure fallacy 纯粹的谬论
❖ downplay 低估
